Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

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 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

WWW - Good Intro, Good concept, Buzzfeed questions, Good website planning
EBI - Too much text on the screen + reliant on reading, clearer conclusion

Research - 5/5 
Concept - 4/5
Language - 4/5 
Representation - 4/5 Mulvey, Hall, Gilroy, Young Rubicam e.g
Audience - 5/5 BandK, Reception theory, Bandaura social learning theory
Delivery - 4/5
              = 26/30

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

For WWW, My research was detailed and included everything in order to be signifcant for my research, such as highlighting, paragraphs for statement of intent, Moreover for concept I believed my concept should of been 5/5 for the use of intextuallity and syenagry within each other and it all tied together. Good use of Media language and Representation of my audience. Linking Audience/ Industry within each other to show how I would sell my soft drink brand

EBI - Including less words, before the powerpoints were in paragraphs but still too long after shortening. Additionally, if less words were used I could get my point across in the 15second timer. I think because nerves got to me, I couldn't perform as well I wanted to on my delivery. 

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I feel I should go back and make bits of my research much clearer for my teachers and peers to understand. Additionally, when understood my concept can be a 5/5. My wrote my statement of intent to be 500 words, and I think I can go back and make some certain aspects clearer.  



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