Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. WWW: Excellent opening, Excellent editing e.g jumpcuts, montage, Post production e.g. on screen text, visual effects, Props e.g. merc car, Cinematography e.g. close up, low angle(car boot), tracking shot, white background, performance, Industry info, excellent transitions, low-key lighting, mise en scene e.g outfit, colour scheme matches concept, collage, good location, end credits, trolley scene EBI: Change typography title to be more readable, lip syncing, more lyrics on screen 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. WWW: Props e.g. car, handbag, different types of shots e.g. POV shot from car boot, collage scene EBI - Changing font, more transitions and have it smoother on some bits such as the phone scene, fix lip syncing...